Lightsong

Remind me to review this later so I can give my crappy review. c:

Ah, I see, thanks for the explanation! Good luck with your novel. :)

I've finished half the review. Your story's long. =_='

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Remind me to review this later. c:

Thanks for the review! Yup, English isn't my first language. I intended the description to be like that because it was like someone saying something in a cute manner. It ...

Thanks for the review! :D Well, I guess I should add another A/N. This flashfic has 292 words (according to Kingsoft Writer anyway) which fulfills the condition of the tournament ...

I intended it to be a death inside Camelia. She didn't believe in justice; therefore, he died. However, that didn't mean he couldn't be resurrected. She could have some faith ...

Thanks for the review! I agree with you about Camelia, but I'd make a case that Justice and Revenge themselves are parts of her. ;) Also, did you notice Justice's ...

This is a masterpiece. xD

All I can do is wrap my arms around him. The hug is hesitant. I'm scared that he might push me away, leave for good. I stand there for an ...

Thanks! :D

It's better, but since you show the persona is crying, you don't have to say she's depressed and sad. That'd be repetitive in meaning. I think you can give an ...

xD It would take a while for me to review this, hope you don't mind waiting! ;-;

Ah, I was confused about that line. 'Leave me' seems to me as the persona wanting the person she speaks to to leave. My point is, certain things are better ...