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Lightsong

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Winged Hope

    /sigh It's a reference. I even hinted on it through the title.

    Dec 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Blood Rain

    The image of rainbow as a whole resembles happiness, and the colours mean people are more than then their races and that they hsve colorful personalities. Please Like it if ...

    Dec 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Writer's Wish

    Thanks for the review! :D

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Alphabet Soup

    Ah, I see. xD Thanks for enlightening me. :3

    Dec 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Writer's Wish

    Author's Note: In order to avoid using 'ink', 'sword', and 'firm spaghetti sticks', I decided to use 'elixir', 'spear', and 'strings of nerves' instead. I definitely wanted to use firm ...

    Nov 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Irrelevant Exaggeration

    Thanks for the review!

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Irrelevant Exaggeration

    Aww, awtbeyder, you're back!

    Nov 20, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Culture Re: Love-hate Relationship with Nature

    Lol, it's okay. I'm sorry too; I overreacted. :) What do you like or dislike about my poem? Answer this and I'll be happy. :D

    Nov 16, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fanfiction Re: Not What It Looks Like

    Pfft, don't worry about it. I myself think a like (or lack thereof) is enough a reply to the reviewer. XD

    Nov 11, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Culture Re: Love-hate Relationship with Nature

    Wait, that's it? My poem consists of several stanzas, and this is what you can say about it? Really? ... You're on point though. Thanks for pointing out the error!

    Nov 11, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Winter's Demand

    Thanks for the review! :D I've been meaning to ask for a third opinion. This poem is quite literal, actually. The speaker lives in a tropical country, hot weather in ...

    Nov 10, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Fasha the Divider [Part 1]

    Thanks for the review! Yeah, Silia was actually a mistake, and I replaced with Kha, because Moon's representation should be a man, not a woman; all of this will come ...

    Oct 30, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: A Moment of Perfection

    Dat ending.

    Oct 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Our Battlefield of Words

    Well, in the debate team (government side) there would be three members: 1) Prime Minister, 2) Vice Prime Minister, and 3) Minister of Defense. The persona is 2. He has ...

    Oct 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Our Battlefield of Words

    Totally makes sense! If my laptop isn't broken, my time busy, and my Internet connection, weak, I'll def want to chat this up. I feel like this is my most ...

    Oct 7, 2016


He who knows only his own generation remains forever a child.
— Cicero