Lightsong

Hey! Happy Review Day! I know this is personal to you so I won't shred it too much. No argument about the ideas whatsoever. :) I see a glaring difference ...

Oh! I want to review this piece but it is just one of the pieces which makes me comment not so much. I do not really know what to say ...

Hey! I'm here to review for Review Day! I have nothing much to critique about this piece. It flows well, the story is interesting. I think you've captured the atmosphere ...

Hey, am here to review! Like some reviewers have mentioned, this poem is simple. Also, this poem has pictures as distractions from the real written poems. Pictures are not an ...

Hey! I'm here to review. First of all, I just want to tell you how sad I'm feeling right now. This is just so true, the part where baby parts ...

Hey, comrie! It's me to leave a review. :) In this chapter, the perspective changes once again. This time, it belongs to Sebastian Cloud, grandchild of Nicholas Cloud. It's nice ...

Hey, I'm here to give you some suggestions. ;) "Man’s Woman Woman ,as born out of man So Lord God named Eve." In the title, you forgot to capitalize the ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :) I've read the novel until chapter nine I think and am sure the Narrator always communicate with the characters, or at least Fiera. Perhaps ...

Is this a haiku? I love it. I love how contrasting love sounds with collision. The violent collision can be interpreted as fiery hot passion of a couple of lovers. ...

Hey, I'm here to review! I like your narration. I feel like this is your strong point, apart from the many meaningful messages you've written here. I'd make a proper ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :) I might take it seriously, which I probably shouldn't since you've said this is a request from a friend. I assume by the tone ...

Ah, a reply to a poem, I suspect this one is. ;) I have very limited understanding about haikus, just that they consist of a stanza with three lines - ...

Hey, it's me to review! :) Before I continue, I just want to say I've read your other piece about that fanfiction of a guardian... my memory is hazy on ...

Oh, this is nice simple poem that would bring no trouble for me to review! :) Here we go. I assume Fish is a bookshop. I don't know the reason ...

Hey! This is a nice story, it's light-hearted and funny. I like how natural the relationship between Chan and his father, Gilbert. They're an adorable pair of dad and son. ...