Lightsong

Hey, I'm here to review. :) Oh wow. The narration about love and how Nyx doesn't want to have that because it would make her look weak is executed well. ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :D I like the scent between the female and male Deathbounds. It's quite humorous, despite it being used to show the male Deathbound is rather ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D I’m escorted back up to my rooms soon after. I believe 'rooms' should be 'room', seeing I should have only one room. I would ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :D Will nods once before standing and helping me up. For the sake of less is more, 'once' doesn't need to be there. “I don’t ...

Hey, I'm here to give a quick review. :D The only reason it would ever take longer would be snow, and then the superintendent closes school, so it wouldn’t matter. ...

Hey, I'm here for a quick review. I liked how lighthearted this was. It was not all serious like I expected it to be, until I reached the part where ...

Hey, I'm here to review. Alright, I'm not going to repeat about grammar and sentence structure. Those two are your major weaknesses, and until I see any improvement, I'm not ...

Hey, I'm here to review. Ooh, I like this. It's definitely poetic, but it doesn't have enough richness to it for me to really feel, you know. Alright, so the ...

Hey, I'm here to give a quick review. First of all, I would like to say how lovely the idea of this poem. It's interesting to find a interpretation of ...

Hey, I'm here to review! I've actually read the first chapter but was afraid to review because the world building was just solid and I could see some Sanderson in ...

The feels! Anyway, I'm here to leave a quick review. The one major thing that attracts me to love this poem is it consists of conversations, which means I'm spared ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :) “Can we help you?” Came a voice. Kyle looked up, remembering his paper with a sigh. “I have this for you.” he said, getting ...

Hey, I'm here to give you a quick review. :D I just want to say Ariel interests me immensely. From this chapter itself, we can figure out some things about ...

Oh? This piece still has one review only? Hmm, alright. You've won my sympathy. I'll review this. ;) So before I touch on the plot and characterization and setting, I ...

I'm not to blame. You did this willingly. ;) Anyway, let review this thing. For the last years of his life, he’d found himself generally more and more shunned from ...