Lightsong

Hey, I'm here to review. :D Bertolt Hoover never saw his coworkers as that energetic. He’d been working at the office for three days, and only one of his coworkers ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :D The story takes a slow pace and is rather atmospheric in nature. It relies heavily in imagery, thus appeals to the audience that can ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :D Though I wish I could say that my love story began by romancing the girl with sweet words: (e.g. If only eternity were a ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :D Apologize if it's too short! The chapter seems like a setup one for me. This is due to it building the tension, with the ...

Hey, I'm here to review (or compliment, because it seems like a larger part here)! :D Evan pressed herself against a wall until the anarchists passed her by. Her chest ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D On a pale dawn, as the streetlights sputtered dark and the sun-- Behind heaving grey clouds-- began to mount the horizon, the town of ...

Hey, I'm here to review! First of all, I spot tense inconsistency across the entire chapter. Not going to point out the verbs, they're easy to find. ;) He appeared ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :D But apart from the drastic physical effects of heavy eating, the man was well-kept; his beard neatly trimmed, his long hair brushed and cleaned, ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :D I spent the night tossing and turning. While this sentence isn't bad per se, it's incomplete. I can guess she's on the bed, but ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D Given that the entire piece is made up dialogues, I wonder why did you choose to make it a short story and not a ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :D First Stanza Well, okay. Maybe I'm too oblivious, but I can't seem to find the connection between third and fourth lines. How does people ...

Hey, I'm here to review. Instantly when I read this Rex captures my attention. His free-spirited personality and uncensored honesty are pretty endearing, and I like how his relationship with ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :D First paragraph draws my attention in an instant. I'm intrigued with June's relationship with her gramma and why she wants to portray the latter ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :D when they tore up the sidewalk to cut down the trees and hacked at roots till bloody sap dampened the dirt, your yard was ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :D Eric had been hoping for a quiet night in while his boyfriend tried to find out what was wrong with him. I don't think ...