Lieke

First of all: what I'm missing right away is a setting. You haven't specified where this is taking place or in what time. Also, take note of the standard play ...

Wow, what a wonderful poem! I think you're using all the right words, making me feel the emotions behind this. I do think however that most sentences are too long. ...

It's a short but touching poem. You've worded well how it feels to be missing someone. I would maybe slightly change the format though. There are several options here but ...

Overall I think that this is a beautiful poem. It's a great metaphor for life I think, of how everything often looks better from far away. The way you described ...

I love how positive this poem is. I also really like how some sentences keep coming back, like "that's just how it goes." It makes the message of the poem ...

I love the idea behind this poem. You know your way around words and are able to grasp the reader within the first few syllables. I would be careful using ...