Liaya

I really like this! Your style is great, your character is good, it's intriguing...I'll have to go back and read the first four chapters! I think you've really got something ...

Haha, well, your writing is intriguing and I really like it but your paragraphs happen at random moments! I'd suggest going back and trying to edit the format so that ...

I really like this! I'm going to have to go back and read the earlier chapters sometime, because right now I'm just going through the green room. Your characters are ...

I really like this. I haven't read any of your previous work, but I might need to when I can find the time. Your character was very real and easy ...

Haha, I think I need to go back and read what comes before this. I literally just threw myself into the middle of a story! Lol. All the same, well ...

I love this! Any person who enjoys writing should like this poem! I love how it's a tribute to so many different things that come with writing. It's enjoyable and ...

Wow. This is intense. I think it's very well done, for the most part; Nick Cutter, Helen, the clone, Connor...you manage to portray a lot of authentic emotion. It does ...

Haha, that format is really annoying! I'm sorry the website does that to you. If you can figure out a way to fix it, I think the whole thing will ...

I'm going to be honest; I stopped reading when the scene with Will came up. I'm sorry, but I'm not interested in that. (Each to their own; you go ahead ...

Okay, first suggestion; end this properly! You don't even finish your sentence and it leaves me feeling very...unfinished. ;) Also, keep an eye out for when things should be capitalized ...

So, I haven't read your Part I yet, but after reading this I'm going to go back and do just that when I have time! I'm intrigued. I want to ...

Ooh, I love this! I love the way this entire poem is related to a clock, and darkness, and the inability to change without help. I love your unique rhythm ...

Is this really your first serious attempt at poetry? Because if it is, you're born to be a poet, too! Once again, thank you so much for sharing this! I ...

I like it! I enjoy the idea of your ugly duckling character who manages to pull through--to "bloom"--and find her place in the world, only to be uprooted and sent ...

This is great! I love how you personify the stories and add this very contemporary flare with the old english feel and words. It's a very fun idea and it ...