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Yeah, it started out as a rap.. Haha.. That's what most of everything I write begins as.. Thanks for the comments guys, I'll work on it! (Oh, and the full ...

Wow thank you SO much! I appreciate it!

Oh my gosh I am SO happy that all of you commented.. I am really smiling to myself, you made my day.. I thought NO ONE read what I wrote ...

Thanks!

Thanks again - I just made a few of those corrections. As for the bold lettering, I like it the way it is.. but thanks for reading!

Thank You! (Lol)

Ohhhhh I loved the idea! Nice job..

I thought this was pretty good.. It def. kept me reading, and that's a plus. Post more! (Haha).

Thanks! Have a nice one as well.

Thanks a lot .. & ha, you are def. right about the seized/eased thing.. I never even noticed the difference before. Thanks for the comments guys..

I'm not going to lie, I'm quite dissapointed. I was actually hoping that at least a couple people would want to read this, that someone would give it a chance. ...

Very nice start.. I'm intrested in reading more.

Seriously, thanks for the comments.. I was just explaining (lol), not saying that I couldn't do better. I'm going to try it again. Oh, and don't worry about the whole ...

I understand where you're coming from, and I def. appreciate any comments.. Anyways, about the whole "telling a story through the poem" thing.. That's exactly what I was doing. This ...

Please don’t let me down again, Don’t ever break my heart, Now that you’re locked up in there, My world has fallen apart. You were what made me happy, What ...