Published August 4, 2005
& it all simply fell apart.
(Let's just put it back together),
Easily you broke my heart.
(I can forgive you),
Your lips are full of lovely lies.
(Yet I believe each and every one),
I’m the hello to all of your goodbyes.
(You get caught up, that’s okay),
You like to say you’re real.
(My love for you is),
While hiding how you really feel.
(Maybe you don’t know how to say it),
You’re busy, but you think of me.
(Just as long as I’m on your mind),
You’re a stranger that I never see.
(I’m here waiting, show up anytime),
I’m holding on while you let go.
(Can’t you see how strong I am?),
I’m just someone you used to know.
(& you’re all that’s on my mind),
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Thanks!
The idea is really clever to put every other line in parenthasies (sp). I like how the normal lines rhime with eachother.