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Lezuli

  • Short Story » Horror, Humor Re: What Would You Do?

    Hi there! Lezuli here with a short review for you. Now, to start off, I would like to say that I enjoyed this story. It was short, but it still ...

    Sep 4, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: S.H.A.D.O.W Chapter 1. Many Meetings (part 1/3)

    Greetings! I am here for a review. To start off with I would like to say that I enjoyed the premise of this story greatly. S.H.A.D.O.W. That is the greatest ...

    Jun 20, 2021
  • Art » Politics, Realistic Re: We Aren't the Same

    Greetings! Lezuli here with a review for you. Now, I'm going to start off by saying that poetry isn't my strong-suit so I'll only be commenting on grammar and things ...

    May 26, 2021
  • Short Story » General, General Re: ...

    Hello! Lezuli here with a review for you. First off, I quite liked this little story. It was fun, light-hearted, and funny. I found myself snickering quite few times throughout ...

    May 26, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Shenanigans of Ruby Oak and Her Crew: The New Mission

    Greetings! Lezuli here with a review for you. Right off the bat, I must say that while I haven't read the rest of your short stories, this definitely makes me ...

    May 25, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Corrupted Courage Chapter 10

    Hello and greetings to you! I am here with a review for you. I read your other chapters and really liked them, so when I saw this only had one ...

    Sep 26, 2020
  • Lyrics » Culture, Dramatic Re: The Coronation Song of Belecthoria

    Hello and greetings to you! I'm here to review this song/poem for you! I don't have any negative critiques, as this is very well written. I like the cadence of ...

    Sep 17, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Scum Patrol: Scene 3: All Quiet On The Labor Front

    Hello once again! I'm back for the review of the third chapter of this! Once again, you raise the standard of your story to new levels of greatness. I love ...

    Sep 17, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Politics Re: America Fighting - Prologue

    Greetings to you! I'm here for a review of this prologue. I've read a few chapters of the novel, so this was nice to read as well. It stays true ...

    Sep 16, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Politics, Science Fiction Re: Scum Patrol: Scene 2: A Scene Of Graphic Violence On The Television

    Hello, there! Once again, I am back for another review of the second chapter. Once again, this is a very well-written chapter, full of lovely descriptions and flowing dialogue. I ...

    Sep 16, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: The Writer

    Hello and greeting to you! Kind of a belated welcome, but just thought I'd say it anyway: Welcome to YWS! Hope you enjoy it here! Anyway, as for my critiques, ...

    Sep 15, 2020
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: The Purge

    Hello there! I am here to review this poem for you. Allow me to start by saying, though I have absolutely no idea what movie you are referencing, the idea ...

    Sep 15, 2020
  • Poetry » Culture, Fantasy Re: Christine City, City of Kings

    Hello there! I am here for a review, this will be a little short since there are no grammatical errors and this was super well-written. So, with that out of ...

    Sep 15, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Fantasy Re: The Day that Man Won (Part 2)

    Hello there! I don't have much in the ways of review since this is such a well-written story. The descriptions were amazing and truly made you feel the horrors of ...

    Sep 14, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Scum Patrol: Scene 1: The World As It Is in the Year 2555

    Greeting and salutations, I am here to write a review for this work today! Before I get into the critiques, I would like to say that this was a nice ...

    Sep 14, 2020


The grand in the hotel rings with broken tunes; the guests frown; the concierge winces. But the blue-hatted boy is happy and braver than they.
— TheMythMaster