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I'm really not too experienced with poetry, but I can definitely say I enjoyed this piece. It's quite interesting and thought-provoking to read, and personally I thought the title was ...

Hi, first and foremost I want to say that above all I enjoyed the story. In almost every aspect from setting to character it was interesting and thought-provoking, and (at ...

Hey, just wanted to say this is really good. I don't really know much about poetry so I won't say much, but to me the structure and rhythm of the ...

I think this is a model short story, as it's simple and intriguing, with a good twist at the end. I also think the opening piece of dialogue is especially ...

Good job on this story. it's a compelling and unique narrative, and In my opinion you've written it so that the story never really ends, and in a way retells ...

I think that this is a rather nice and simple short story you've written, and that the only way you could improve upon it would be by polishing the actual ...

Honestly, I'm not one to review poetry as I barely know anything about it or how to critique it, and the only reason I clicked on it was because it ...

Personally, I really like short stories and this one is quite good, with opportunity to be even better. There are a lot of things that make the story very powerful, ...

What I really like about this short story is how simple and down-to-earth it is. It doesn't have a specific message its trying to convey. (at least not in a ...

I do like this a short story piece, it's succinct, sends a powerful message and it leaves possibility to be expanded on in multiple short stories, a novel or just ...

This was really fun to read. I like stuff like this, its quite amusing and unique. One thing I found is that it really draws someone's interest (at least mine) ...

Overall this is a really good first chapter, it's interesting and grabs a reader's attention pretty well. I saw one of your newer chapters but I thought I'd go back ...

I think this a really cool premise to start off on, it serves you well because you could really go anywhere with it if you didn't already have an outline ...

I think the message of this story is pretty good, it is simple and clearly shows the flaws of past society and the consequences of those flaws. There's nothing wrong ...

Over all this was a pretty good story, it conveys a really good feeling of horror and hopelessness throughout the worsening scenario. I've read a few of your other things ...