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Re: Thy Kingdom Come
Well that's quite flattering, actually. Thank you! Alright, I'll look at that line and see if there's anything I could replace or change a bit. I'll play around with it. ...
Mar 15, 2018 -
Re: Thy Kingdom Come
Indeed. To be saved despite the crimes we've committed is quite astonishing. Baffles me to this day!
Mar 14, 2018 -
Re: Thy Kingdom Come
Thank you. The road to faith was not an easy one, and it's still tested to this very day, but in the end, it was most definitely worth it.
Mar 14, 2018 -
Re: Thy Kingdom Come
Yes, it referred to me. I try to guide others, yet I myself am lost in heart. Or I was, at least. Before God's grace found me.
Mar 14, 2018 -
Re: Have You Ever Lost Someone
Never know what life has in store for any of us... It's an unpredictable road to say the least! Godspeed!
Mar 6, 2018 -
Re: Have You Ever Lost Someone
I read it. All of it. Quite an interesting read, that's for sure. There is no life without loss. I've lost people too. Grandmother to Alzheimer's, great-grandfather to pneumonia, cousin ...
Mar 6, 2018 -
Re: Racism
Hey, no problem. I know I might be a tad harsher than some reviewers and really 'go to town' on authors, but it's all meant in good heart, believe me. ...
Jan 9, 2018 -
Re: him
Brutal and honest... Good to see another reviewer who does not hold back. Utterly honest, yet constructive criticism is the only way we can improve, so I commend you on ...
Jan 6, 2018 -
Re: The Boy Who hated Lefties
Really old work, but hey, I'll give my comment on it... I actually took it as a left vs. right political message, rather than a question of left-handedness. Didn't realize ...
Jan 3, 2018 -
Re: 'Cause Freeverse 'Rulez...'
Hey thanks. Finally this can leave the Green Room, eh? And of course. I definitely realize that poetry is and always has been considered art. Poor phrasing on my part.
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: Amidst assembled throngs
Hmmm, more Christian themes on the sites. I love it mate! Keep it up!
Dec 27, 2017 -
Re: 'Cause Freeverse 'Rulez...'
Haha, thanks for the review. The sudden change may have been a bit odd, totes agree on that. I wanted to first show the type of poem I don't really ...
Dec 22, 2017 -
Re: A Jar of Marbles
No problem. Keep using meter and rhymes. It might be harder to write, but I'm telling you, it pays off.
Dec 21, 2017 -
Re: 'Cause Freeverse 'Rulez...'
Yup, I'd think so too, but I don't want a barrage of unpleasant looks coming my way, especially since free verse is quite popular 'round these parts. Then again, writing ...
Dec 19, 2017 -
Re: reindeer
In that case, full steam ahead!
Dec 3, 2017
