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LeutnantSchweinehund

LeutnantSchweinehund

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: Thy Kingdom Come

    Well that's quite flattering, actually. Thank you! Alright, I'll look at that line and see if there's anything I could replace or change a bit. I'll play around with it. ...

    Mar 15, 2018
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: Thy Kingdom Come

    Indeed. To be saved despite the crimes we've committed is quite astonishing. Baffles me to this day!

    Mar 14, 2018
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: Thy Kingdom Come

    Thank you. The road to faith was not an easy one, and it's still tested to this very day, but in the end, it was most definitely worth it.

    Mar 14, 2018
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: Thy Kingdom Come

    Yes, it referred to me. I try to guide others, yet I myself am lost in heart. Or I was, at least. Before God's grace found me.

    Mar 14, 2018
  • Other » General, General Re: Have You Ever Lost Someone

    Never know what life has in store for any of us... It's an unpredictable road to say the least! Godspeed!

    Mar 6, 2018
  • Other » General, General Re: Have You Ever Lost Someone

    I read it. All of it. Quite an interesting read, that's for sure. There is no life without loss. I've lost people too. Grandmother to Alzheimer's, great-grandfather to pneumonia, cousin ...

    Mar 6, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Realistic Re: Racism

    Hey, no problem. I know I might be a tad harsher than some reviewers and really 'go to town' on authors, but it's all meant in good heart, believe me. ...

    Jan 9, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: him

    Brutal and honest... Good to see another reviewer who does not hold back. Utterly honest, yet constructive criticism is the only way we can improve, so I commend you on ...

    Jan 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Satire, Dramatic Re: The Boy Who hated Lefties

    Really old work, but hey, I'll give my comment on it... I actually took it as a left vs. right political message, rather than a question of left-handedness. Didn't realize ...

    Jan 3, 2018
  • Poetry » Satire, Literature Re: 'Cause Freeverse 'Rulez...'

    Hey thanks. Finally this can leave the Green Room, eh? And of course. I definitely realize that poetry is and always has been considered art. Poor phrasing on my part.

    Dec 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Amidst assembled throngs

    Hmmm, more Christian themes on the sites. I love it mate! Keep it up!

    Dec 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Satire, Literature Re: 'Cause Freeverse 'Rulez...'

    Haha, thanks for the review. The sudden change may have been a bit odd, totes agree on that. I wanted to first show the type of poem I don't really ...

    Dec 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Jar of Marbles

    No problem. Keep using meter and rhymes. It might be harder to write, but I'm telling you, it pays off.

    Dec 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Satire, Literature Re: 'Cause Freeverse 'Rulez...'

    Yup, I'd think so too, but I don't want a barrage of unpleasant looks coming my way, especially since free verse is quite popular 'round these parts. Then again, writing ...

    Dec 19, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: reindeer

    In that case, full steam ahead!

    Dec 3, 2017


"I love you as certain dark things are to be loved, in secret, between the shadow and the soul."
— Pablo Neruda