LeutnantSchweinehund

Hmm, maybe. Maybe. Free verse is something I've tried to avoid, because most people can't really pull it off and it turns into prose in lines. But you know what? ...

Oh, don't worry, so do I. My country was occupied by communists who were, quite frankly, worse in their behavior than the Third Reich. But I wanted to pay respects ...

Haha, yeah. They mostly were. At times, I found it really difficult to stick to the iambic tetrameter along with a strict rhyme scheme. But as an advocate of form ...

Ah, well in that case, I can't help but agree with you. And it's a crying shame too. Having such a limited vocabulary just limits a poet. Unfortunately, we must ...

Wretch meant in the sense of an individual of low stature and poor quality. A Nazi wretch. The enemy. I'll confess, I don't actually know what retch means, haha! And ...

It's so, so torturous, since I'll never have her. Had my shot, and I didn't take it. I'm too late, and by God does it kill me inside. I'm with ...

Thanks much for the review! I'll just throw in a bit of an explanation. 'To strike the helm and pierce the wretch' - the Red Army charged as their commanders ...

Hmm, well maybe I should. I tried my best to follow the 'March Royal' rhyme scheme, where the line with rhyme E is repeated word-for-word. It's supposed to add an ...

Poetry is hard. Very hard. But it's good to keep going, keep writing and gaining experience. Solid for a first attempt. Next time, you'll fare even better.

No no, worry not, those are not mistakes. Non-exact rhymes are by no means a mistake. Keep at it, good luck!

Oh, well thank you! This is over a year old, but if it's actually good, I might as well rework it and start anew. Been interested in writing a partisan ...

Thank you, thank you. Appreciate it very much! The rhyme scheme is as follows: A B A B C C D D E F F E G G

We're all edgelords at that phase. All of us.

Good on 'ya! I used to be exactly like that.

I swear, it ain't no phase maahm! I wanna have green hair! Gimme back my Xbox! Haha, nice for a laugh. Thanks!