LeutnantSchweinehund

This... This is something of legends mate. This is possibly one of the absolute best pieces of poetry I have seen on this site, despite its short length. I am ...

Didn't I see this exact review somewhere else...?

I'm not too great at reviewing poems, so I'll just comment with a few opinions and tips. The topic, while very common, wasn't really handled all that badly. You mentioned ...

By the way, about the arrangement of the dates... Only the first entry is out of place. The rest are in chronological order.

Hey, thanks! I really was quite uncertain with the second sentence you corrected. I didn't really know if there should or should not be a comma, so I decided not ...

This thing isn't worth a second draft, to be honest. Anyway, to clarify, yes. It's about someone who shot themselves in a chapel and now cannot pass through purgatory for ...

I don't think I quite understand... Is this a fictional story? An essay of sorts? I can't quite wrap my head around it. I assume this isn't a character of ...

As you should, brother. We succeed, or we die fighting like wolves. Life has given us bad cards, and I say we shove them up life's... Well, you get the ...

I suppose. I don't plan on becoming a full-time writer in this lifetime, so I suppose it's a mistake I can live with.

I checked it as well. Both are used under different circumstances, and frankly, I don't get it at all. I know that when reading the Philosopher's Stone some time ago, ...

I was only half lucid when writing this awful excuse for a literary piece, so I don't even know what the hell it was about myself. I think it was ...

Well now... Interesting. Very interesting. What's so interesting? Allow me to elaborate. Those are some very reasonable desires, an ideal I'm sure many of us hold dear, but I fear ...

No big deal. The last note probably bears the most significant message. It is crucial.

You got me there... That's what I get for not playing Super Smash. Time to get high on mental weed and pretend like stuff makes sense! The lizard people will ...

Big words man. It's all about the big words. No really, depends on the genre of literature. Some styles work better with complex vocabularies, while others work best with a ...