Hey there, Eli here!
As others before me have said, this work is full of negatives and complaints of someone who could do so much more for the world instead of just killing themselves and quitting it all. It is absurd but I guess it depends on the person? I honestly thought you will be talking about a real problematic life of someone poor, not educated or something that causes sadness in their life. Something that they lack that everyone else already has naturally. But it was a surprise to see it is totally the opposite. The thing that I disliked more about this work than the concept of it which is too complex and twisted for me was the grammar that we are having here. It is all messed up and the reader who is averagely knowledgeable in the language will notice at least most of the mistakes. I will correct some parts that are from the start and more noticeable from the reader and might make them leave this half read and read something else instead. Also, the title of this work is also grammarly wrong spelt.
My life is a shit, always has been and always will be… It’s not something I did or didn’t do, it’s just shit on its own. When I look back I see that there are so many things I could have done differently and better, but that’s life for you; only one chance to do something that you barely understand, and it’s almost sure that you will screw up and it’s all downhill from there. A key thing is that you need to survive, other than water, air and other crap, is to be as stupid and ignorant as you fucking could. Too bad I’m the most gifted human to ever live, intelligence wise, thanks, evolution… I am simply brilliant, to say I’m genius is an understatement, it’s more like I am to geniuses what they are to you regular people… I am a genius and I’m alone and bored as fuck. Because to be smarter than everybody else is to be alone. Fuck my fucking boring life, I started school earlier than everybody else, I was better than everybody else, I finished before everybody else. Fuck everybody else, fuck school and lastly fuck me. When I got to college, I was already bored as fuck, so I went for psychology for some fucking reason. It was domination once again, until one day I said fuck all, and started fucking around.
I loved to get myself wasted in oblivion… That worked for a while until it stopped and it was back to fuck bored again. Honestly, I never found love, it’s was always easy to get girls to sleep with me, just a few lies and you got them to do stupid stuff they would regret later. But like everything it gets boring very quickly and you forget why the fuck did you do it in the first place. Simply, I never met anybody who could keep up with me, maybe a few people but they mostly didn’t give a fuck, and why should they. At some point I realized the true point of life and it wasn’t pretty… I realized that life has no real point or goal, it’s just survival for as long as you can. No god, no higher purpose, no love, and no fucking anything… it’s just lonely cold fucking rock with water where bunch of organic creatures try/ied desperately to survive. Even everything has to die and everything will die and disappear. And there you have evolution finest. Humans are a fucking epitome of ability that nothing makes any sense, species that have the ability to think and dream… fuck it all… I quit and killed myself, now I’m a fucking ghost, not like that gay Casper, but a real badass fucking ghost… just kidding. There is nothing after death, and not dark and empty king of nothing but real fucking nothingness… BYE LOL
Keep on writing!
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