LeutnantSchweinehund

It flows rather well, I think. This is better than most things I find on the site, especially since MOST of the rhymes aren't forced. Sure, there are a few ...

Wonderfully short, in my opinion. I can appreciate short poetry to break the trend from time to time. Still, I don't really get it. These aren't song lyrics, I don't ...

A good effort. I have a two significant complaints about this piece: The lack of rhythm and its overdone topic. Now, don't get me wrong, that doesn't mean you're a ...

Nice! Love the way it starts. Right into the action, no pointless exposition - it's really good. The opening is just lovely overall. It firmly grasps the reader (me) from ...

Quite a nice little read, in my opinion! I read it twice to gather my thoughts before picking it apart like the literary vulture I've become, but I cannot guarantee ...

Greetings! I shall attempt to review your work! I note that I am no expert on poetry, nor am I a seasoned member of the site. But I am an ...

Greetings to you! I am Schweinehund, and I shall now review your work. However, I am not much of a seasoned poet myself, so my criticism is purely subjective. I ...