LeoPenrhythm

Thank you :)

hey, thanks for your comments...thanks for pointing out the mistakes. I will definitely work on those. But the last one, was not exactly true, as you must have missed the ...

thanks....actually, i tried to portray the half alive and half dead condition of the lover...he has no idea where to look for his loved one, but still he dares to ...

hey! thanks for the review...and regarding your confusion with "flams" here is the answer...flams means loud beats of i have used it here to describe the moment when the lover ...

Thank You :-)

Thank You :-)

the prospective for both are the one(in general) can describe what is life...you will always find yourself contradicting your own thoughts and definition of life regardless of your sex......

Heyyy!!! thanks for your review...I will definitely work on it...and as for the rating..I'll rate you 10 out of 20...because first you said that you don't like old english (5 ...

lies means as in laying, not lying as you thought....and art here is the old english for "are"...thanks for your review anyway:-)

And one more thing...I would like to call you tolstoy...not leo..that's my name you see...hehe:-)

And one more thing...I would like to call you tolstoy...not leo..that's my name you see...hehe:-)

And one more thing...I would like to call you tolstoy...not leo..that's my name you see...hehe:-)

Having got that, the intended use of the expression of which i was a bit doubtful, I will say again that it is indeed a good poem....:-) just one thing..just ...

Hehe:-) thanks for your "brief" review OMG

Thanks for the review:-) regarding the expression of "laugh we spake," I meant to express the laughing, or in better words, jovial conversations we school life, it specially refers to ...