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yay! I vote to nix the title's translation. If people want to know, they can go look it up! (and they should know that if it's Claud, it's French :wink:) ...

As for Luci, I purposefully left that open. Reader's choice :grr: ambiguity. No, I like, actually. Sort of... more like an un-hell. The forgotten core of the Earth that doesn't ...

Thank you Claudette; my brain can understand it now too :D I put up a version 5, but it's not too different from version 4; not as major of a ...

"“Are you all right, Aisha?” Jaleh asked her softly, her green eyes filling with concern as she brushed a stray wisp of hair out of her eyes. " Oops, sorry ...

Ohhh, I see. I just had to think about it from a different direction. :D

It seems like profanity and degrading words just for the sake of it. And anyone can do that.

Wow. Totally spaced that there was a link there. I just searched through YouTube instead. And I didn't hate the music as much as I had thought I would. Yeah, ...

Can it be? A version 4? Yah. Most def. xantham: I am so determined to perfect this, even if I have to carry it around for the next ten years. ...

Now, we fell in love together, exchanging fears that something bad would come of this. I'd reword the end of this; it's wordy. I liked the word "together", though, because ...

Hmm, there was talk of goddesses, but no mention of the siren logo. The "All hail..." was too repetitive. In fact, you more ro less repeat alot of your ideas, ...

Quarks are what make up the subatomic particles protons, neutrons, and [I believe] electrons, like protons/neutrons/electrons make up atoms. I think "Five Chairs, One Empty" fits better and makes more

As I assume that this is indeed a product of boredom, is it wrong to hope that you're bored more often? ^_^

[spoiler] Now bear with me on this; he's in the middle of a massive magical siege, he has very little time in which to find an object with which he ...

I commend your decision to leave this as a stand alone piece, Joe. I think adding to it would make it seem less... magical, somehow.

[spoiler]I too think that Snape's death was the saddest in the book. Along with Hedwig. They just met such tragic ends, and both died rather alone... oh no, I'm gonna ...