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Hey, your actual writing style is bluntly sweet and delivers a message clearly. However, I strongly disliked the obviousness of the concept. A broken heart, if that's what you meant ...

Hey, there was some really beautiful imagery in the poem. Every sentence triggered an angelic picture in my mind. It was simply wonderful. I appreciate how kindly you look upon ...

This is so heartbreaking, and evoked a lot of emotion from me. I honestly wanted to cry and hold my Teddy Bear in my arms haha. You really have a ...

Wow, this was depressing and personally typically over-dramatic. I understand that some people are more susceptible to emotional outbreaks than others, but to me this short story just gave me ...

Ok, so I found your story really difficult to focus on because of the countless grammatical errors you made. I spent most of my time thinking about what I was ...

That was suspense at it's best. You turned such a small issue into a frighteningly disturbing issue. I love the ambiguity of the ending, I get the impression that the ...

Hey! I liked how you could so beautifully transform something so simple into a heart panging narrative that was packed with emotion! I love the development from the french toast ...

Awwww this is adorable, and actually pretty clever. However, there are a few spelling errors that you need to correct; "freind" should be "friend" and "ware" should be "wear". There ...

You are basically just describing your perception of the beating heart. I don't know if this would really qualify as a poem, it is more like a highly descriptive paragraph ...

Heeey, I like what you are getting at here, however I think you were a little too simplistic in delivering your point, as I was a bit confused as to ...

Hi! I like the emotion expressed in your poem, it is....very emotional haha. However, I rather disliked the sloppy structure, and the distinct lack in grammar. It is important that ...

Hey, i like that you tried to base your poem on the expression of the content that you wished to discuss, however, if you are going to do that, there ...

Hey, I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. A real work of art that contained an immense amount of symbolism to convey something mesmerising. I particularly loved how you discussed the word ...

Hi, I found this short and cutting poem pretty interesting, however, whether I am just slow to process stuff or just tired, I had this nagging feeling as i read ...

Hey! You kindly reviewed my work about vampires, so I'm going to review yours! Firstly, just to get it out of the way, there are a few typos evident in ...