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No problem :)

Well the parts will come burn the parts will come and thanks for the review ! :)

Thanks

"what is health but just a picture of the thickness of my grave?"

Wait, i don't understand how to do that like im trying but it doesnt work

Oh, Noah for me was a true leader he showed a little something that undeniably got my attention. Noo! your not going to do another one but it seemed that ...

Thanks, Burn. I wanted this for a while but we got there and on grammar erros i will correct them next time. Thanks for the review!!

I will inform you!. I didn't see those mistakes i thank you greatly!!

Thanks, i will proofread my work next time

I really really really love the narration i absolutely loved it and i want more and more and more and more. for a first time impression you really nailed it

Yaayyy :D i cant wait and no problem :D

Yeh thanks for the feedback much appreciated and illl try to covey on the grammar mistakes and this is only the prologue do it wont be as long as the ...

Thanks And ill try to fix it but thanks anyway and Chapter 2 and chapter 3 will be the last of this prologue and ill try to make these amazing ...

Wow Thats Tragic I felt the characters pain and sorrow for this alone is amazing and im now becoming used to poems frequently all i ask you is to make ...

This Is way too long but good at the same time well done!