Layla

I like how you chose this form of poetry and i like the beginning. But you might want to space it out a bit so it's easier to read and ...

I love this!! It's beautifully written. I love how you made their love sound suspenseful and dangerous. It seems like their love will last forever...

I like your start. You should put just a little more detail. And at the end you should put something mysterious hat would make your readers anxious to read your ...

I like this piece. Send me a PM when you post the second part of it please!! But anyways I'm a little confused..did she kill him or is she just ...

its still good a song and a poem. whatever you want it to be. it stills send out that message you're trying to get out there. its beautiful.

That was a great story. Very. . . very touchy. I hope you write more to this story.

wow. thats sad. was she a good friend or is this just made up? overall beautiful. Not really in a poem form but it still works.

Wow. That is EXACTLY how i feel inside. EXACTLY. that was a totally amazing poem.

that was a cool little story. pretty koo pretty koo. write more!!

That was pretty tight. Cant wait for more!! :))

uuhhhmmm. That was soooooo incredibly cute and awesome at the same time.!! But it was also kinda sad how you said that everyday went by and everyday that went by ...

no offense or anything but this was kinda boring.

THIS WAS KINDA GROSS BUT IT WAS KINDA WEIRD AT THE SAME TIME. CAUSE I UNDERSTOOD WAT YOU WERE TALKING ABOUT BUT THEN I GOT ALL WACKED OUT.

WELL. . SORRY ABOUT WAT HAPPENED TO YOUR MOTHER IF ITS ABOUT HER. BUT BESIDES THAT I LIKED THIS.

that was a good Proluge and yea i want to hear/ read the rest of it. jus make sure that you make the 'celebrity stalker' do a whoole buncha crazy ...