Layla

This was cute. But yeaah, you should make this into two(or even three) parts. It's a little bit too long.

Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaan! I want some peeeps.!!0

Hahahah this is reall funny. Not that your misery is funny or anything, but you know what I mean.

Hey! You shouldve kept going! This is really really good. I loved how you pieced this together. There's absolutely nothing to critisize.

This is really good and good decision to rate it 16+. haha even though I'm not. Well anyways you made a few spellig errors, just minor ones. Just review it ...

Hi...I really liked this. You came too late You let me die You made me cry You came too late In the beginning you should change it because you repeat ...

You are really good.!! I can totally relate. Has this happened to you before?? Sorry if it has.

This is beautiful.!! It's one of those songs that would be my favorite if it was a real song. Love it.!!

This was really good. It seemed a little bit too smooshed together. You might wantbto double space it.

I loved this book. I read it when I was in the fifth grade. It's a good book but it's one of those books you can only read once.

I loved how you started this out with those vicious thoughts in the beginning. You could really get somewhere writing like this. Keep it up!!!

This is pobably THEE best love poem I have ever read in my life. keep writing.!!

Two words;LOVE IT.!!! You are simply a wonderful writer.

Hello i'm Layla.! I like you poem first off. It wouldve been great if you wouldve added more to it and gave it more emotion. But overall great.

No it isn't about me and her. It sort've is but it isn't