Laydra

Hi, I'm not going to nit-pick, pretty much everything that needs fixing was already said. Overall I liked this poem. It was quick, simple and well written. You put to ...

Hi, Overall I thought this poem was cool. The only thing I would suggest is to add some punctuation (though I'm not good at grammar either). This was deep; I ...

This is not sappy! The only thing I see that you need is more punctuation, other than that it was wonderful! My favorite lines are: in nightmares and daydreams do ...

This was a nice piece. I've NEVER read something that took the side of the Germans so this was pretty interesting to me. I think you need some punctuation, as ...

Hello there! First off kudos to you for trying something new and giving it your best effort. To be honest I felt like I was going from here to there ...

Hello dear, I enjoyed this piece very much. I agree with what everyone else said. This was my favorite stanza: A person changed. I see the way you look at ...

Hi, First off, I liked this poem a lot. I wrote one similar to it awhile ago, though it didn't rhyme. Well, since this one is almost perfect and the ...

This was rather creepy, but I liked! As for a clue...I'm not that good with titles...Again, I really liked this :D Sorry if this review is rather soft and lame...I'm ...