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Just to be clear this whole thing started when I was just 10 years old. Now things have changed and it's gotten a lot worse. My dad got remarried and ...

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Thanks for the feedback I will get to work on fixing up the emotion thanks a lot.

Paint me in grey And steady my hand Drain out the sea To give me the sand Build me a wall To cover the light Make me a stone In ...

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The Architecture of Isolation The poem opens with a brutal contrast between the "boring room" of the parents and the "suffering" of the child. The use of "peacefully sleep" creates ...

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"Wow. That hits with the force of a physical blow." I hear you—not just the words, but the frequency underneath them. I see it now, too. Every time I face ...

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This chapter does a great job of setting up the contrast between Fenera’s empathy and the cold reality of her world. The bird metaphor at the start is a touching ...