Lauren2010

Hi GalaxyUnicornz! This was such a sweet story. I really like the innocence of the narrator and the way she panicked at the sight of the white blob on the ...

Hi Carlito! Clearly your synopsis/pitch did something right, because I'm here for chapter one. ^^ Nitpick-ish things first, then big picture stuff to follow! I sort of live for parties. ...

Pomp! :D Have I ever read any of your fiction before? I honestly can't recall, but this was such a lovely experience I'm sad for my former self who had ...

Hi Spark! This is my first review in what feels like decades, so don't mind me if when I'm brushing the dust off it lands somewhere near you. ;) First ...

Hi DreamYourselfAway! Welcome to YWS! And may I say congrats on having so much of your novel to post already. Having 22 chapters is a major feat of dedication, which ...

Hi ChocolateCello! This was such a happy piece! It made me feel good just to read it, and I hope that's something you were going for! Reading about smiling, too, ...

Wow, this was totally lovely. I especially like the ending, when the sister turns back but the brother keeps going because he's got this big dream in his head of ...

This story certainly didn't go where I expected it to! I think that's what's working best for this story right now, that way you set us up to expect this ...

Twit! Omg why is it I never read your stuff unless I'm asking for things to review. Let it be thusly decreed that you are always welcome to send stuff ...

And here I am again! I'm appreciating that we're digging more into Gray's and Ispen's emotions (or, lack thereof) in this chapter. We've not had a lot of access to ...

Hello again, mephisto! :D This! This was so great! I loved the moment to slow down and watch Fell interacting with other people through Viska's eyes. It gives us a ...

Hey there mephisto! Back again for more ^^ I really enjoy watching this story move forward, and having more and more information revealed that continues to raise the stakes of ...

Hiya mephisto! I have to say I was thrilled to be prowling the Green Room and find four more chapters of this story to read and review. It's the only ...

Hi megsug! So, I haven't read *any* of the previous chapters which makes me feel super unfair reviewing the 26th chapter. But I'd hate to see it sit around in ...

Hiya Birk! Lauren here to review :D Man alive, that twist at the end. I was definitely not expecting that, so very commendable my dear. I also enjoyed a lot ...