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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Shifters: Chapter 10

    Yay more Shifters! :D I, again, enjoyed this chapter. It was small, but held a lot of much needed affection and happiness. Every story needs a little break from the ...

    Mon Apr 26, 2010 7:08 pm
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Use Somebody-Kings of Leon Parody (She don't deserve Jacob)

    Hey Natibabes97! This was amusing. Though, I feel like it isn't formatted right for lyrics. It should be seperated into verses, choruses, etc. This doesn't look like a parody to ...

    Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:51 pm
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: "You're a First Rate Geek" (You Belong With Me PARODY) Edit

    This was really amusing! I'm no lyric expert, but there were two things that stood out to me in this. 1. The formatting. Please take the time to format this ...

    Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:43 pm
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Wolf (Temporary title till I can find something)

    Hey Leth! Nice to see you decided to do something with this! (I was in chat when you were asking about continuing from the prologue). You've got the girl pov ...

    Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:28 pm
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: A Message

    Hey LRJack89! I'm Lauren and I'll be your reviewer today. :) I was a little confused on how this fit into the Fantasy category at first. And I still am. ...

    Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:18 pm
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Youth in My Eyes

    Hey Atticus! Here as requested :) This was really interesting. I loved the tone, the descriptions, the writing, the concept. It was really engaging to read, and lacked all the ...

    Thu Apr 22, 2010 8:08 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Dragons

    Hey Highlander! I'm Lauren and I'll be reviewing for you today. This was rather interesting, but has a few issues with it. First off, these chapters are extremely short and ...

    Tue Apr 20, 2010 9:38 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: My guardian dog 10 - OLD

    Hey there! Review time! This was a great chapter. I'm loving the Wogs, and the magic exhibited. The plot is well on it's way, and developing nicely. I still love ...

    Tue Apr 20, 2010 9:20 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Pugna: Introduction

    Hey thatboy! I'm Lauren and I'll be reviewing for you today. This was pretty interesting, and I like that it's an "introduction" and not a "prologue". Prologues bother me. This ...

    Mon Apr 19, 2010 7:17 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Brotherhood of Silence, Chapter II

    Hey Tomothy! Sorry for the delay, I don't check my guestbook so often. Sending me a PM (private message) by clicking the button under my name/stats/sidebar things that has a ...

    Fri Apr 09, 2010 11:36 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Riptide part 1&2

    Hello Zibbie! This was pretty interesting. The intruige surrounding the dream and the mystery of Sera changing overnight would make me want to read more of this, so that's good. ...

    Tue Apr 06, 2010 2:02 pm
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Rhett

    Hey there grimy! I'm Lauren and I'll be reviewing for you today. This was pretty interesting, though quite short so there isn't much for me to go off of review-wise. ...

    Mon Apr 05, 2010 5:01 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: My guardian dog 9 - OLD

    First review ^_^ Anyways. I only have one nitpick so lets get that out of the way first, shall we? I wonder what I would have chosen as I shape, ...

    Mon Apr 05, 2010 4:49 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Nobodies

    Hey there DustyDust. You definitely have an interesting premise on your hands! The whole being dug out of the grave, and being unnoticed by the human eye. Quite interesting. One ...

    Mon Apr 05, 2010 1:17 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Of Wild Flowers-chapter 2 part 1

    Hey snoopysoap! Lauren here, I just reviewed the prologue so here it goes! (I'm going to kind of review this as I read, so my overall impression will be at ...

    Sun Apr 04, 2010 8:17 pm


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