Lauren2010

Hey Ahmad! Back again! I reviewed the edited version posted in the comments section, just so you know where I'm going from. Now, let's get to it! Then, an unwelcome ...

Hey Ahmad! Here again! Let's get to it! Next, I’ll be the cause of World War Three. Since this goes with the very first italic bit, it should be in ...

Hey Ahmad! Here as requested at last! I really love the voice of Liam and the feel of the story so far. It's interesting to read and does a really ...

Hey Jas! Sorry it's taken me ages to get to this >.> But I'm here now! Let's get to it! watching the dripping blood dye his dark blue eyes a ...

Hey Dragongirl! Back again! Let's get to it: The sidewalk was devoid of people and he was able to make fairly good time. I'm really starting to wonder about this ...

Hi Dragongirl! Here again! Let's get to it! Convict’s description: height: 5’7. Hair color: Black. Eye color: Blue. Age: 14. I didn't expect that Ares was only fourteen. He seemed ...

Hey Dragongirl! Here as requested! Sorry I took so long to get around to it! Let's get to it, then: Ares shifted in his seat, trying to work some circulating ...

Becki posted a story! *sinks teeth* :D Let's get right to it, shall we? The stonewall dug painfully into his back, the scrapes and cuts covering his body stinging as ...

Hi emmylou! Lauren here for a review :) This piece is very beautifully written. I love the language you've used, and particularly the way you utilize the second person in ...

Hey Berlynn! Here again as requested! Let's get right to it, shall we? "No, not really." He sat down and she continued looking through pictures. "Rebecca are you going to ...

Hey Berlynn! Here as requested, sorry it took so long! Let's get right to it, then, shall we? "Do you have him?" A voice hissed from the receiver in my ...

Hey Devan! Here again as requested! Sorry for it taking so long! Let's get right to it then ;) A young boy of around the age of ten was huddled ...

Hi there Devan! Here as requested! (Sorry it took me so long!) This is a really neat, poetic piece. I like the poeticism about it, and how it gives the ...

Hey Hermes! You reviewed one of my pieces, so I'm here to return the favor and review one of yours! First, let's get through the nitpicks: Heather walked down the ...

Hey Jas! Here to review as requested! Sorry for the bit of a delay, but I'm here now. :) I really enjoyed this chapter. It was so sad, and I ...