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HEY HO SORRY I'M SO GODAWFUL LATE TO THIS. Let me just say, I know you're calling this the unholy infodump but it truly doesn't read that way. I'm fascinated ...

OH BOY HOWDY WOULD YOU LOOK AT THAT Jeez, the drama in those last few paragraphs. I'm so excited to see what comes next, and to see if we ever ...

BET YOU THOUGHT I WAS KIDDING, DIDN'T YOU. Whoa man, this was a lot of fun. I've been watching (and rewatching and rewatching) The Good Place recently so weird retellings ...

OH BOY OH BOY OH BOY Hello :) Man, this was thrilling! I totally envy the way you write action sequences, especially considering you had superpowers to explain. I was ...

Hello my darling! Okay so I read this at work on my lunch break, please forgive me if I'm scattered. Basically, I'm so pleased you're working on this again! I ...

Hello again! BOY this took a turn I wasn't expecting! I'm a fan of framing devices, and I loooove that they're telling their story in place of their biography which ...

Hello hello, Thundahguy! Here I am at last to get caught up with this story. :) First things first, I can already tell this is going to be a whole ...

Hello, hello! Okay, I adore how FUNNY Clem is, even when faced with danger like this. Yet she's still so deadly serious about everything. It's a really nice balance that ...

Hi there Maisha! What a pleasure it is to read something so thoughtful and curious about democracy. I know you feel you're too young to discuss things like politics, but ...

Hi there Storybraniac! I really enjoy the repetition in this poem of sun and of darkness, and the juxtaposition of the two. I love that the speaker both likes the ...

Hello hello! I'm back again, here to catch up on this end of the novel (I promise I'm reading the next 10k you sent me, and will have that feedback ...

Hello hello! It's honestly so fun to get to jump back and forth between the chunks you're sending me of beginning stuff, and these action-packed later chapters. I think it'll ...

Hello again! While I know I JUST read the previous chapter, but something about the beginning of this one made it feel like I missed something. It might be in ...

Hello there! Happy review day! I know I haven't read any of the previous parts of this, but DANG I wish I had been because there's so much good stuff ...

Heya, SavannahSamford! Back again for another review :) You do a great job keeping up the momentum here from the previous chapter! The stakes are high and the energy is ...