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It was actually because the girl had moved overseas, and the too flat houses were kinder drawings, then the books and graphites indicated primary school but I guess the time ...

Alright, fair enough but for the I, you could add in a footnote so you can avoid this type of confusion in the future.

Oh! >.< Now I see it, I apologize for my stupidity.

Thank you!

Thanks so much for kind review!

This is ....where simplicity works its magic! I can't review this..there's nothing to review. :D

I'm flattered, thank you once again for your kind reviews!

Thank you for this review!

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed this, perhaps I will lengthen this one day...

*bows* Thank you!

Aww, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this!

Nope, you weren't! I love criticism since it helps me to improve, actually looking back I see you have a point about the last two stanzas. I was a bit ...

Hmm...horizon? Twilight? Sunset? I have no idea...

Hey rhiasofia, I must say this is a simply wonderful poem. I have no critics for it, just popping in to say I just love how raw and beautiful this ...

No problem, is awesome!