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...there is, my eyes are too small. Wait, aren't you suppose to be in bed?

Alright, thanks Andy. I can see what you mean by the plot holes and I will admit that Sidgurl appearing out of nowhere was a bit random. But the court ...

xD, thank you so much for the compliment! I think you just made my day, I'm experimenting with review styles here and there, so is great to know is worked.

Oh I have googled them, but I don't know they don't usually use it in books like this only in formal essays. But in any case, you are right. I ...

Hey, I will review this later, just to say. This is my favorite chapter by far, your writing had gone up a few notches. :)

Oh, lol. Nor do I, planning is weird...

You've been working on it for years!! o.o Now I feel horrible at criticizing such planned work, xD. But I'm so gladly reviews are helpful, motivates me to review more. ...

Ah, that title is indeed intended and I learn Latin as well, xP, so I might include some Latin stuff later on. Ah, you're probably right about describing the world ...

Awesome! Glad you liked it! ^^ Sure, I will send you a PM after I reach out on all of my grape vines.

It is when I can even hear the sound of the coffee I pour myself and actually focus on the tinkle of the spoon Yes.

Thanks so much, Aley! I'm going to try that and keep your tips in mind. :)

Well, you've kept me interested for three chapters. I'm impressed, I don't usually even go past the second. I'm going to review this later in depth. :D But hey, keep ...

Ah ok, I see where you're coming from. But Glass is meant to be will evolve later on.

x.x Oh crap, the format messed up majorly. Thank you though!

Know that feeling way too well. xD