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Re: Flakes
Reviewlutions here to the rescue!!! Happy review day and I'm here to review your wonderful villanelle. Ok, first of all. I have to laud you on the fact you wrote ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: In The Darkness
Hai Lalia, happy review day! Laure here for a short review! So, I'm going to start off with the technical things. Both grammar and content wise. From what I read ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Azazel: Prologue
Hai queerelves, Laure here as requested and happy review day!!! So, I'm going to start right off the bat with the first and most important nitpick. This is not a ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Home Sweet Texas [Chapter 1: Part 1]
*rides into Dede's house like a boss* Hai Starleene, Laure here for a review!I'm going to get the technical details over and done with, because I do them as I ...
Apr 25, 2014 -
Re: Marbles
Hai magpie, Laure here for a brief review. This is a really unique and strange poem about...I'm not sure what. I'm not that good at it interpreting poems really but ...
Apr 23, 2014 -
Re: Who I Am.
Laure here for a review! Once again, your late midnight poetry is astounding sweet and wonderful. Though you really shouldn't be up so late! So, I will pick out the ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 3 Part 2
Hai, said I would be back! It is I, once again here to review your part two. So, this time I'm going to start with the technical things and then ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 3 Part 1
Hai Noelle, your ever faithful warrior has come to review your chapter! I didn't review the previous two because they already had plenty of reviews. Though I couldn't help but ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: Chasing Nightfall Chapter 2: Names.
Hai, Laure here again for chapter two. I actually review this as I read along the piece, and all my praise will be at the end. Don't hate me for ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: Chasing Nightfall Chapter 1: Daughters.
*gallops in astride a horse and bows* Most noble lord, this humble squire had come to review your chapter, I'm going to break this review into two parts. Content and ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: Where Sad People Turn Into Flying Saucers
Soo here I am, at last. Albeit a bit late, here I am as requested. So, I'm going to break my review into two parts. Content and technical things, and ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: deleted
And I'm here again. This is yet to be my favourite chapter, I finally got the chance to see more of the boys. Before this chapter, I got the feeling ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: dfhkl
Hai, Laure here again for chapter two. So, I like where this story is going, is pretty intriguing especially with how the girl turned into a werewolf. I can't judge ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Untitled - Intro - Breathe
Hai Zar, Laure here to review as promised. So I'm going to break this into two parts, content and technical details. Content: I'm going to echo Iggy here, the piece ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Gather Me Flowers (Avari's Song)
I...wow. I just wow...that is the most beautiful song I've ever seen, heard whatever. I though this was a published work of a well known author for a second. Because ...
Apr 14, 2014
