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Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 1
Hai, Laure here for a review! I'm going to leave the technical things to some other reviewer, terribly irresponsible of me I know. But I get the feeling this story ...
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Re: Life of Stephanie Pritchard~Chapter 1: 8th Grade Prom
Hai, Laure here to murder and ripe your pieces apart mercilessly review. I'm going to start off with some technical things and mentioned some suggestions along the way with both ...
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Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Chapter 6
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May 21, 2014
Hai Zont! Laure here again for a review! So, I'm going to start off with a few technical things. He swallowed deep, to then exhale. I noticed this problem throughout ... -
Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Chapter 6
Hai Zont! Laure here again for a review! So, I'm going to start off with a few technical things. He swallowed deep, to then exhale. I noticed this problem throughout ...
May 21, 2014 -
Re: 1
Hai Ehtaniel, Laure here, once again and at a loss of words. Is probably this headache speaking but I can't quite conjure up what I wanted to say about this ...
May 21, 2014 -
Re: Forcing Fate
Hai MS, Laure here for a review! Before I review, I must declare I'm in no way a poet or even close to it. But I will do my best ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: The Need To Kill
Hai punkpanda, Laure here for a brief review! So this is a short story about the girl's thoughts on suicide, a rather dark subject to write about but that's your ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Baby Virgins [null]
Hai, Laure here again! This isn't going to be much of a critical review, I've read this chapter I've four times now and there is not much for me to ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: Fern - Chapter 2: Visiting Jumper
Hai Mess, this is probably the first time I've reviewing your work so prepare for an onslaught . In case you don't know how I review, I usually point out ...
May 19, 2014 -
Re: A Dream of All Dreams
Hai, Laure here for a review! Well, this is certainly interesting material to write about. If I'm not wrong, I think what you're writing here is the character's descend into ...
May 19, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Oh Sweet Home [null]
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May 16, 2014
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Re: The Story Of My Mind
Hai Crosa, Laure here for a review! This is a very beautiful concept here and nicely written to, so definitely kudos for that. I always love reading these pieces about ...
May 16, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Nazza [null]
Hai Blackwood, no wonder why no one is reviewing your works, they really are hard to critic. So this review will be mostly more ranting on about the story, characters ...
May 16, 2014 -
Re: Tribals - Section 1 l Chapter 1 l Part 1
Hai, Laure here for a massacre review! The title is not too long at all, don't be silly. Now, this is going to be a rather irresponsible review because I'm ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: A Letter
Hai GrapeNerd, Laure here for a short review. So, I'm going to reverse my usual reviews and start off with the content. This letter I assume addresses the issue of ...
May 14, 2014
