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Laura_Jane

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Heartbreaks and Headaches

    well i liked it

    Dec 28, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Scared

    overall that was really good..but i didn't really like the ending as it didn't fit in with the rest of the poem..does that make sense?

    Dec 28, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Friendship

    Seriously i thought that was really very well written, and it clearly came from the heart. I really liked the style and the structure of the poem aswell!

    Dec 28, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Writer's Block (Revision 1)

    Well done! That made me laugh a lot, and thats normally how i feel when i write!

    Dec 28, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Suicide Note

    That was amazing! It nearly made me cry was so expressive, and thoughtful also the rhyming was really good , and i LOVED the ending

    Dec 28, 2007
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Harry Potter fanfic (from epilogue)

    I thought that was excellent..i loved how Albus seemed to calm about draco's son, and i thought the description of rose was really thoughful:), Are you going to continue with ...

    Dec 28, 2007


We understand how dangerous a mask can be. We all become what we pretend to be.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind