LastSilverH3r0

Howdy, Doug here to review you! Wow, that was a really intense piece there. I like the imagery you put in there, and I also like how you brought back ...

Hello there, Doug here to review you. Now, I would like to start off by saying that I really enjoyed this chapter. Nothing about the plot I would like to ...

Hey there, Doug here to review you. First of all, I really like your imagery for the most part, but I feel like there are areas where it could be ...

Doug here to review you! Well, I would like to start off with saying that I'm not all that sure how well I can review you, or if it will ...

Hey, Doug (Lastsilverh3r0) here to review you, mainly because I saw that no one else did, which I find weird.. So, I really liked the whole play-type writing. The only ...

This is certainly an interesting piece, and very original. I did not expect it to take a turn like that after reading the title (I quite honestly thought it was ...

I really like what you have here. It looks like you really let your mind wonder on this, and that's a good thing. I like your imagery, and the flow. ...

Wow, that was really interesting and easy to follow. I felt like its simplicity and smooth flow really kept me connected. I love the dialogue and the thoughts of the ...

Wow, this was a really good story. I really liked how you described the setting and how you set up the plot. The only pointers I would give, being a ...

I really liked the story you put together here. The only thing I'd like to say is that it's kinda hard to follow with all the grammatical errors (don't worry ...