LastPaladin

I would only like reviews on the main / finished piece, please. And there's a total of 10 drafts, I just wanted to post the beginning bones of this. ___ ...

Let me begin by saying Doom when people spend time to review a piece, you shouldn't be condescending, especially as this piece is very ambigious and if someone doesn't understand ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and here's the review you requested. As I read this I couldn't help thinking of syndrome the' been there done that' idea, because essentially it regurgitated from ...

Sorry for the delay I shall now attend to this, sadly unlike Lumi, I didn't quite like this, yes it's an interesting idea, but you neglect to really capture what ...

Greetings, I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, I shall now explain right away I didn't like this, and I admit I can be rather harsh, but please don't ...

Interesting, Lumi, it very deep but some parts I love, others came across as you put pretentious. It's beautifully crafted and it's obviously been constructed under influence of something. It's ...

Hmm Foxy this is interesting, there some spelling mishaps but I don't really see how the title fits, it's beautiful but it didn't quite hit the right chord with me. ...

Okay Emz, I'm going to warn you here and now this review will be harsh. See there potential I can see that, but it dragged on so much and much ...

Greetings Lumi, I'm LastPaladin as you know. Now it's strange reading a poem like this after watching American Beauty it hits the right chords and I feel I understand it ...

Lumi this is amazing the flow and beauty of piece really made me appreicate rhyming poetry again. I've no complaints the story told well with exellent clear and concise stanzas ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and sorry to say but this is angst and has no real emotion it tries to have raw unfettered emotion but it comes across rather as 'emo' ...

Greetings Creative I'm LastPaladin and this piece is best I've seen all day, not for the complexity but for the simple nature and how we can all relate to it. ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I'm two minds about this poem you begin rather blandly with some nice wording, and okay imagery but then like here: so we look through the ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I'll be your reviewer, sadly this piece came across as many do, cliche and nothing new is added it's similar story heard so many times and ...

Hi, I'm LastPaladin and I've read this before but the points being made were exactly my thoughts, so thought best not go on. But Nate called me out, so I ...