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Re: Jacq of Hearts
First off going to say great use of metaphor, the name of your love worked very well with this. And now I shall say hello, I'm LastPaladin, you may have ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: "I Love You," You Said
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, this piece here, comes across to me as a replica of many of the same you see elsewhere, perhaps I'm wrong ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Frost
Greetings Nightshade I shall be your reviewer and my name is LastPaladin what struck me about this poem was it seemed like a musing but much like a musing it ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: A Veil of Clouds
I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, this piece struck as something trying to be deep but missing the mark as even though it has the imagery it doesn't ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: stones and little bird bones
Ah Jagged what we have here is a very interesting piece, interesting how you ask? Well it seems to be about a deadly obsession, something loilita like, the kind the ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: To accomplish
Hello, I shall be your reviewer for today, I'm of course LastPaladin. As I read this poem a thought occurs to me, it's not exactly that much a cliche, but ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Suicidal Moon
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today, I shall examine this poem with great scrutiny and decide whether it can stand up to that. I'll take ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: The Best Friend
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall reviewing this rather unique piece, I say unique but alas unique doesn't always equal good, but it can if you're willing to listen take ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Ugly Mirror, Pretty Mirror
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, it's my opinion of this poem is not only did it kick us out not allowing any imagery to capture, it ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: As Kingfishers Catch Fire (Original Remake)
It's rare for me to be impressed, but I LastPaladin have to say I am impressed and even though your first line used from another poem, you manage to keep ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: The Battle For Happiness (Edited)
Here I am as requested, LastPaladin. I shall say right off the bat, this piece doesn't seem so bad. It seems to have some great enveloping imagery, some great lines ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Vagrant mother
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today and it's a sweet change or surprise to find a piece that isn't generic or an emo type poem ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: The Shadow and The Flame.
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today, this piece is one of those ones that tries to be original, but when given the chance it fails, ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Silence
Greetings I'm LastPaladin, first I'm sorry to hear about your friends death and offer my sincere condolences, nonetheless, I can't offer much good words on how you demonstrated your upset. ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Angles
Hey Kamas as asked I'm here to review, now I'm not impressed perse but I'm not disappointed you delivered. But you don't want praise so I shall reread and we ...
Nov 26, 2010
