LaraJane

Woah ignore the typos Idk what happened lol

So the %u201CI%u201D is Maddie watching these memories from her past self%u2019s body, and %u201CMaddie%u201D is the past her she%u2019s watching because Maddie is sort of narrating her own past ...

I loveeee this I’m always in love with when items/natural elements act like people and did a good job at portraying this. I’m excited to read more to come as ...

I love that book! I definitely did love that concept and that may have added to my idea of this hahaha.

Ugh I did get so lazy at the end haha it's a bit obvious... This was meant to be a short story so I found the shortest way to wrap ...

I like this concept of rather than placing these people as memories, they're only stored as names. This interesting because it makes my thoughts jump to whether these people had ...

Oh my gosh thank you for the wonderful review! I love hearing notes about my writing and this made me smile reading the entire way through!!!! " He knew she ...

I'm glad it sounds interesting! I'd love to hear your thoughts on the rest of my book as well :D

I'm getting major Percy Jackson vibes and I feel like he'd totally fit this poem too. Love this!!