LanguidLiger

Interesting. The poem begins with you biting back repressed anger. Then you end it with the rejection of the domineering subject, and you fall into the loving arms of self ...

Whoops! Forgot o hit that review swith. Dont mind me! Well as an atheist I cannot vicariously relate to your stance only refute it However I did not think that ...

I know this story began with a cliffhanger hardyhardyhar, but a backstory more tangible may be nesscesary to set he characters straight in the rreaders mind. I was expecting jack ...

I enjoyed your musing on the routines that fill moments destined for something greater than rearanging the trinkets watching us from our windowsills. The piece started off with the big ...

Now Im not going to pretend to be a mind reader hear, but are you conveying your ideas of muddyd memories of friends passed on? No matter your narration on ...

Hi. I enjoyed the imagry and the base analougy, but I sometimes think that we focus too much on allegorys and not enough on the uniquness of our situation. The ...

I think I understand what you are trying to say-"and it was just was"-but you coul benifit from some punctuation here and there. Some other, perhaps awkwars, sentences were "strange ...

I like the dialouge you put to work here. I know reason doesnt beet out deppression at the best of times. Ive felt that long disjointed ebb that doesnt feel ...

Pleasent. But a bit choppy. Particularily when you refer to her "shadows hide her neighbourhood". Is this an anomynous she? A self representation? Or a loved one. You need to ...