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  • Other » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Unfinished Diary of TBJ (Part 3)

    Hey-o. My name's Lana, you requested a review from me a good but ago--sorry to make you wait I know how stressful waiting for reviews can be. Anywho... Synopsis: I ...

    Dec 15, 2018
  • Poetry » Literature, Mystery / Suspense Re: Shhh...

    Hi, review requested and review delivered! Hi. Hi....Hi. Synopsis: I'm actually not sure in this one. It's about lying/secrets that are jam, but also writing, and the narrator is done ...

    Dec 13, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: White

    Hey-o, sorry it's taken me so long to get back to your review. I had finals, like I said, so I'm just getting back online today. Anywho, into the review. ...

    Dec 13, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Dragons Egg

    Hi, I'm Lana. You requested a review from me? I'm gonna start with a quick synopsis to see if I got the details right: So Luna, who I think is ...

    Dec 10, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 19.2)

    Hey-O, I think I reviewed a chapter of this before (the one where she finds the painting that's bad and then finds the list of names which is worse), so ...

    Nov 22, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Unhandy Ocean Chapter 1: Loneliness

    Hey-o "On the beach a 17th year old girl is preparing to go out to sea. The teenager has orange hair ending into a ponytail which is hold together with ...

    Nov 19, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 17.3)

    Hey, I'm new to this story so a bit of recap to make sure I got all the details: Star breaks into the captain's office and finds a painting behind ...

    Sep 17, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (2.2)

    Hi, First a recap to make sure I understand the story: Carter has been approached by Gideon and Isha friends of his sister and members of a dangerous organization. Turns ...

    Aug 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Valen: Chapter 1.4

    Sup, First a recap to see if I got all the details: Mel is a person with a power or /vale/ who was raised in the "wrong sector" (Not sure ...

    Aug 29, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Bloody Nails--- 1

    Hey, A recap to make sure I'm getting the details straight: Three teens, sorry four teens decide to play with a Ouijia Board (this will end well). I tend to ...

    Aug 20, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Glowpeak Academy- Chapter Four

    Sup, I'm gonna open up with a recap to make sure I have your details straight and to help you see what's getting across and what's not: Nunez is a ...

    Aug 19, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter 20.3

    Sup, Let's start with a recap to make sure I got the details right: "Wielde the almost king of the dragon people (whose kingdom is not doing well) is the ...

    Aug 18, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 7 (LMS IV)

    Hey-o, First a recap to make sure I got all your plot details correct: Jerica is former princess now assassin in a dream where her family that she never really ...

    Aug 17, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Revolting Knights - Chapter Three

    Sup, Also haven't read the other parts, but I was impressed by this one, might check out the rest. First a only semi-sarcastic recap to make sure I got what ...

    Aug 16, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Technology Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 2

    Hey-O, So to start off a summary to make sure I got what you're puttin' down: Cora (who is deaf or mute, I guess, and probably a foster or adopted ...

    Aug 16, 2018


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