Lampshade

This is pretty good Magic. I think that I do agree with Kylan, though, as the beginning needs a tad more action. PLEASE!! continue to write on this. It is ...

Nice job, it seems to be pretty good to me. Just make sure you write some more in it so we can fully understand it because right now it is ...

Okay I made some changes thanks for the advice everyone. Sorry I couldn't use your suggestion Snoink but it would completely throw the story off. My italics also wouldn't work?! ...

Thanks Imp for replying I really appreciated your comments I'll change them ASAP.

Nice job. I really like how you had the twist at the end of the story. As Gyrfalcon pointed out you do have some grammar mistakes but overall I thought ...

Good job this is a pretty well written piece. I found myself intrigued by it. However you either need to write more on this to explain it or need to ...

Nice job!!! I really liked your writing it drew me in and make me think at the end. I especially liked your last line as it was awesome!

Please comment on this story as almost nobody on TSR commented about it!!!

Good job! That was really funny. I also like your disney bashing. :D Please write another story like this!!!

How do you write so well? Nice job Myth!! There was only one thing I had a question about and that is why did the mages hide their name? Besides ...