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LakeOfCancer

Being A Leader Doens't Mean You Have to Be Rude To Others To Get Them To Follow You. It's That You Give Them A Good Example To Follow And Look Up To.

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Politics Re: Marked

    Wow! I love this, I hope this becomes a novel because it's so amazing. I love ow you will explain what the markings mean. But I think maybe you should ...

    Dec 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Medic and Doc

    Aww! This was amazing! Fluma, if your great grandfather was still alive, I'm sure that he would be proud of you for honoring his memory! Like you, I never got ...

    Dec 6, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Memes

    This was hilarious! I loved it! I especially loved how in the last line, you said, "Except the dab.........we don't talk about that." That was the part where I died ...

    Dec 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Deleted

    I love this just like your poem about your mother, but instead of a crime he committed, my dad left before I was even born, so I understand what you ...

    Dec 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: deleted

    Wow...I'm speechless. This was amazing, I know a ton of people IRL that could relate to this, even I can relate to this. So, even though, my mother doesn't call ...

    Dec 6, 2017
  • Short Story » Humor, Horror Re: Christmas Fears

    Oh. My. God. THIS WAS SO AWESOME!!! I know this for a fact because clearly if my heart started to slow, and I got nervous, then I know this was ...

    Dec 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Alive

    Wow! This is definitely realistic alright. This basically describes how I felt when I felt this way a year ago, I felt like I didn't deserve to live, that someone ...

    Dec 6, 2017
  • Lyrics » Humor, General Re: Twelve days of YWSmas

    Aww! This was adorable! While I may not have been in it, which kinda hurts but is perfectly ok with me, I thought that this should be the new 12 ...

    Dec 6, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Blanket Threads and Flower Petals

    This was amazing E.E.! I think that this shows how people are sometimes not ok inside. How they say they're fine but they know that they aren't. It's emotional, like ...

    Dec 5, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: ducks

    This poem is hilarious, I'm sure anyone who reads it should read it out loud, saying it in front of the audience, the audience just making confused faces at the ...

    Dec 4, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Wall vs Love

    I think this poem is something a broken hearted soul would read to ease their pain, I'm not saying it's bad, I'm just saying that maybe for anyone who feels ...

    Dec 4, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: The Outside Perspective (this time informed)

    Wow! I don't know what to say.... I'm not sure if it was just so heart-felt, or if it was just confusing. But this was really good. It was kinda ...

    Dec 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: i used to be human

    this reminds me of a song that i absolutely love, it's called iRobot. These are the lyrics: I was a human, breathing and thinking Eating and drinking, phisosiphizing I was ...

    Dec 2, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: With Liam

    This was so good, I really liked how you introduced Coralia by telling the audience about a struggle many people deal with all the time. It's nice to know there ...

    Dec 1, 2017
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: In Which I Meet a Pigeon With a Rather High Class Fashion Sense

    This was hilarious, I think I might be Michael!XD I think so, because, if I asked my friends, they would say I'm annoying. For example, if one of my friends ...

    Dec 1, 2017


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