On the first day of YWSmas @DemonGoddess gave to me;
A lovely reviewwwwww.
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On the second day of YWSmas @Mea gave to me;
Two rhyming poems, and a lovely review.
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On the third day of YWSmas @Querencia gave to me;
Three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review.
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On the fourth day of YWSmas @Snoink gave to me;
Four new members, three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review.
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On the fifth day of YWSmas @Rydia gave to me;
Five shiny stars, four new members, three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review.
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On the sixth day of YWSmas @Sheytato gave to me;
Six storybooks, five shiny stars, four new members, three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review.
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On the seventh day of YWSmas @saentiel gave to me;
Seven novel chapters, six storybooks, five shiny stars, four new members, three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review.
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On the eighth day of YWSmas @Steggy gave to me;
Eight funny memes, seven novel chapters, six storybooks, five shiny stars, four new members, three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review.
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On the ninth day of YWSmas @Nate gave to me;
Nine forum posts, eight funny memes, seven novel chapters, six storybooks, five shiny stars, four new members, three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review.
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On the tenth day of YWSmas @Wolfical gave to me;
Ten spotlight works, nine, forum posts, eight funny memes, seven novel chapters, six storybooks, five shiny stars, four new members, three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review.
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On the eleventh day of YWSmas @BlueAfrica gave to me;
Eleven new clubs, ten spotlight works, nine, forum posts, eight funny memes, seven novel chapters, six storybooks, five shiny stars, four new members, three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review.
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On the twelveth day of YWSmas @Iggy gave to me;
Twelve fun friends, eleven new clubs, ten spotlight works, nine forum posts, eight funny memes, seven novel chapters, six storybooks, five shiny stars, four new members, three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review.
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Greetings! Katie here for my first ever review!
Wow, this was really good. Getting into the Christmas spirit!
I would suggest you take out the comma there, as it’s not really necessary.
I always thought it was twelfth.
Forgive me here if I’m wrong, as I’m new to YWS, buthow can someone give you stars or new members?
That’s about it for the nitpicks! Overall, this was really good. Sorry if my review was a bit harsh!
All the best,
Katie xxx
Thank you!
New members are people who join the site and the stars are people liking a work or review.
Hello TheBlueCat and @Flumadiddle! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!
On the first day of YWSmas @DemonGoddess gave to me{:} {YES I AM POPULAR}
Give me your soul.With that aside, I'm not the best at lyrics but here we go!
Bold = grammar and flow issues.
Italics = suggestions and overall
Strikethrough= removeUnderline = krazy Kara komments.
Spoiler
A lovely reeeeeeview. {I noticed that this isn't very flowable with the rest...? This is the only elongated word?}
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On the second day of YWSmas @Mea gave to me{:}
Two rhyming poems
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On the third day of YWSmas @Querencia gave to me{:}
Three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review.
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On the fourth day of YWSmas @Snoink gave to me{:}
Four new members, three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review. {How can Snoink give new members...?}
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On the fifth day of YWSmas @Rydia gave to me{:}
Five shiny stars, four new members, three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review. {Giving stars is not a mods job. It's when you review}
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On the sixth day of YWSmas @Sheytato gave to me{:}
Six storybooks, five shiny stars, four new members, three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review.
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On the seventh day of YWSmas @saentiel gave to me{:}
Seven novel chapters, six storybooks, five shiny stars, four new members, three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review.
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On the eighth day of YWSmas @Steggy gave to me{:}
Eight funny memes, seven novel chapters, six storybooks, five shiny stars, four new members, three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review.
{MOOSENJUSTDOITPEPECUPOFDIRT}-
On the ninth day of YWSmas @Nate gave to me{:}
Nine forum posts, eight funny memes, seven novel chapters, six storybooks, five shiny stars, four new members, three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review. {Nate's never on... change this to someone else}
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On the tenth day of YWSmas @Wolfical gave to me{:}
Ten spotlight works, nine
,forum posts, eight funny memes, seven novel chapters, six storybooks, five shiny stars, four new members, three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review.-
On the eleventh day of YWSmas @BlueAfrica gave to me{:}
Eleven new clubs, ten spotlight works, nine
,forum posts, eight funny memes, seven novel chapters, six storybooks, five shiny stars, four new members, three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review.-
On the twelveth day of YWSmas @Iggy gave to me{:}
Twelve fun friends, eleven new clubs, ten spotlight works, nine forum posts, eight funny memes, seven novel chapters, six storybooks, five shiny stars, four new members, three thoughtful gifts, two rhyming poems, and a lovely review.
Overall:
I loved it. Especially since I'm featured in it
Why haven’t you given me your soul yet? --
Kara
Thanks!
I thought you already ate my soul?souls grow back rememberAh rightOH NO I'M SORRY IF I ACCIDENTALLY TAGGED YOU
Hey, hey. I've recruit people before.
This is amazing! If I have time today, I will review it!
I AM FIRST
HA
edit: I just noticed I'm the only one on there that's not a retired or current mod O.o
Omg I just relized if this gets 16 more likes it will be in the top 100 literally spotlights. Damn!
That is interesting.
Okay so this is a really fun idea! I think you're expecting me to be a little over generous but, that aside, you've done well at choosing elements of YWS to substitute for the gifts and it reads really nicely!
thanks!
Thanks !
Heya!
As usual, I REALLY DON'T HAVE ANYTHING TO SAY
*glares at his own measly poetry.
I love the way you end everything with a lovely review! My God, you two should write together more often, this is a masterpiece!
Thank you! And I LIKE YOUR POETRY. We should collab sometime. Thats a good idea.
Thanks!
Aww! This was adorable! While I may not have been in it, which kinda hurts but is perfectly ok with me, I thought that this should be the new 12 Days of Christmas! Or should I say...the 12 Days of YWSmas?XD Hahahaha...hahaha...haha...ha....ok, anyway, I thought this was hilarious and awesome! I can't wait to hear all the new Christmas poems and such! Keep it up!:)
Thanks!
I wish we could have put a ton more people in it there is only so much room! I was also kinda aiming to include some well known people that a bunch of people might know.
I bet that would've sounded amazing!!! But that's ok, I mean like, I get it, and plus, it is only the 12 days, not 15!XD
Hey there! I know this'll be pretty difficult ot review, but I thought this was a really neat idea, so I figured I'd just leave a few of my thoughts here and call it a review.
I did like how this followed the original pattern of the song 'The Twelve days of Christmas', and you were also creative enough to mention many of the aspects of this website, like the stars, forum posts, clubs, storybooks, literary works, and, of course, reviews.
However, one thing I didn't like quite as much was how you seemed to somewhat arbitrarily pick names out of a hat. Unless there was some order here that I missed, I didn't really see a pattern here, and that could be a way for you to make this better.
Hopefully this review was helpful, even though there wasn't much to critique here, but if you have any questions, feel free to let me know, and I'll do my best to clarify anything that might need clarified or help you out as best I can, and have a merry Christmas season!
Thanks!
Yeah, there was no order for the names, we just chose some well known people, but I guess we could make there be an order and purpose. Thanks again!
NINE
and thank you MJ!
CAT IT ALREADY HAS FOUR LIKES
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NOW ITS FIVE
Are people even reading all of it? They're so fast, man! xD
I KNOW ITS LIKE OMG ITS CHRISTMAS THEME LIKE IT ALREADY
Haha I was actually going to post it closer to Christmas when I had the idea originally, but I guess it doesn't matter! (Also 8!!!!!!!!)
yES
TEN
TWELVE
THRITEEN
14!
18!
20!!!!!
AHHHH
I seriously didn't know it was this great!
Same here!
@Dreamworx95 @DemonGoddess @LordTachanka @woahhitherepal @WhosabellCanWrite @TheBlueCat @LittleLee @Iggy @Rydia @Nate @Sniok @Steggy @saentiel @BlueAfrica @Querencia @Mea @Wolfical @Sheytato
Heres Cat's and mines lyric... thing for YWS and the holidays! Enjoy! ((sing at the top of your lungs and annoy parents and siblings, I dare you. Its the best way to spread Christmas cheer, singing is.))
Lol you tagged my on my own work xD That last line though, BlueAfrica all the way!
Didn't even notice that! And yes, BlueAfrica all the way.
Psst! You misspelled Snionk's nameArgh I did too, it's Snoinknooooooo
@Flumadiddle
yEs