Laelle

Thanks for your input. I will definitely try using stanzas during my next piece. Again, thanks!

Thanks for your review. I'm stillc editing the last bit. Trying to make it less forceful is a bit hard. But I'll definitely work on it. Thanks again for the ...

You're welcome!

I just loved your review. I had noticed that, but really didn't think too much into it. Thankyou for showing me what kind of impression it gave. I'm so happy! ...

It seemed as if this was more of a faithful Christian story than a romance. Maybe it was the way I interpreted it... I found this extremely lovely, and smooth. ...

Okay. I really hope you continue writing about apples then. %uD83D%uDE09

You're welcome! :D :D :D

You're welcome! ;)

Thanks Captain! I was never trying to accomplish a rhyme in this poem, but I'm glad there was some. Thanks again, and have a good day.

You're welcome, welcome!

Yep, this is part of a some I heard. I originally wrote this poem seven months ago. I was listening to it when writing, I thought it needed some more ...

Thanks for your positive review Salty!

Oh, it was fine. I'm used to people getting annoyed with my reviews. Yous was pretty serious though. You had me worried for a second.

I'm so sorry. Now that I read over my review, it was really harsh. Your poem was lovely, just a bit confusing to me. Again, so sorry about that.

I do too! He's my good luck charm! :D