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Re: Tribute- Chapter 1,2, and 3
Welcome to YWS! I'm Nagrom and I'll be your reviewer today. I heard about you from my step-sister, Lauren B. She told me you'd joined YWS, so I thought I'd ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: cornflakes
Hi there! I'm Nagrom and I'll be your reviewer today! First off, I'd like to say that this is very good! Your character is absolutely brilliant, and the tone is ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: The Twin
Hi! Nagrom here! Welcome to YWS, I'll be your reviewer for today! NitPicks Yesterday in TV-show he won a smile. In should be on, and you don't need a dash ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: The Villain's Hero (prologue)
Hi! I'm Nagorm and I'll be reviewing your story today! I'd like to say this was very interesting! I would definitely keep reading. Nitpicks The homeless, confused at the stranger; ...
Oct 29, 2010 -
Re: Romantic fantasy
Hi! Nagorm here! I'm going to start by saying this was rather cute. I'll move on to NitPicks Rod and I were just watching tv You've forgotten to put a ...
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: Renaissance Man
This is extremely intresting! As everyone else has said, you emphasised the kiss a little to much. The artist boyfriend seems very intresting as a character, he seems pretty dang ...
Sep 24, 2010 -
Re: This Poem of Cliches
I couldn't find much wrong with it. It's a really good poem. The only thing that bugged me was this: And please don't tell them I'm what I'm about to ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: Dear You.
I love this. How could you think it doesn't make sense? I love the way you took a cliche such as this and turned it into well... this. I can ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: I Don't Want to Die
Hi Skins! Seeing as everyone else has already done the nitpicking, I'll just tell you my thoughts on this. It was wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. I love the emotion in this. ...
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Mary Sue Therapy
Alright, as a person who has a strong love hate relationship with Twilight, I love this. Bella's speech was wonderful, I think Ebony had plenty of potentiol, though she should ...
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
I'd have to go with You are so undead to me . Dear God, I kind of liked it at the beginning, but the farther I got into it, the ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: The violinist
This is my first review, so it should be fairly horrible. Why did she have to taught me so Right here you should have put a question mark. And I ...
Jul 10, 2010
