LadySpark

Thank you :) it is only the first chapter though, more information will be given soon.

Now that. That is good.

Thank you darling! I think I mainly didn't put what the wanted in there because I wanted her to feel... very cold and far away? An empty shell almost? Anyway, ...

the poem is supposed to be all lower case. :)

D:

So good

I remember when Kyll was going to have all the YWSers come together and do something similar to this.

This is grand.

Well thank you! :)

I respect you for deciding against what I said about religion and leaving it in there. I really do. Maybe when you re-write it, try and look at it more ...

lol

I hope he is. I've spent my whole believing in him and asking him for strength, and he's always given it to me. Whether he exists or doesn't exist is ...

opps, submitted before I was done. Anyway, there is no backing evidence for either one. You can't know he doesn't exist, and I can't know he does, so why bother ...