LadySpark

hi wicked! okay I am going to review you today :) my corrections are bolded and my comments in red my additions are in blue and the cancelation are marked ...

hey! looks like I'm your first reviewer! I love it when that happens! okay here is my review (corrections are bolded comments in red Are we infatuated? Or are we ...

hi!! okay the corrections are bolded (like so) and my comments are in red ink It was an average day for James c ulist. he was a tall scrawny boy. ...

I think this is really sweet, so Im not going to nitpick :) just good job and keep it up :)

hey! Looks like I am your first reviewer!!!!! Im sonny by the way. the things i bold are things linked to comments my comments are in the red color:) Slowly, ...

Hey! Im Sonny and I am going to review your bio today. -ok this suddenly goes from *american salad bowl* to how muvh you hate high school thats random and ...

Ok this looks more like a short story not a poem. And its random. I hate randomness (LOL) If this is a real experince i apoligize. If not well im ...

hi I'm SOnny and I will giving you a review today :) I don’t see why we should lose a daughter when guards can do a perfectly good job.” I ...

hmmm........ This makes me wonder a little bit. The water chattered and danced across the rocks. It sashayed along the banks and swirled around with joy. The trees were shrouded ...

I like this alot! i hope your english teacher gave you a good grade as well. Little fast with their relationship I think I like the part about gabriel crying ...

Awesome I'm your first reviewer!!!!!!!!!!!!! okay lets get started. but first the bolded part is the stuff that need corrections. the red is the corrections :) Look close to find ...

this is really good and i like that its a true story, it makes it easier to right doesn't it? okay time for nit-picking: Yeah, I know it seems like ...

ok i have a lot to say so lets get started: WARNING: i tend to review harshly so beware. An illusion, what is it? is it a trick, is it ...

hi! okay i have a lot to say so lets get to it! Chapter 1 Blackout. -Savannah- Last week- that’s when it happened, but no one has answers. No one, ...

good,good,good I love a good tragic love story. it always make me sigh and this one was great! there are some grammar issues, but i usually don't go into that. ...