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Re: Friendship Reunion prt.1 *edited*
Hey! Pointe here as requested! My heart couldn't stop beating quickly. I was sitting at my desk, watching my hugest crush stand at the front of the class. He was ...
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: An Immigrant's Tale
Chapter 1 It was a blustery winter morning as Kate Gallagher struggled to lug the two buckets of stream water uphill to the house. It had been bitter cold the ...
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: Lovely Nights: Unfinished Chapter 1
hi someone :) sorry I didnt have time b4 :) Chapter 1: The dream “Hello there,” said a voice that sounded sweet and gentle. “Oh, Hello,” the girl said shyly ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: All I'm Asking For
Hi Ima :) (thats your new nickname by the way :)) and I am going to review you today :) I’m not asking for a lot of attention , I’m ...
Nov 12, 2010 -
Re: crying on the cross
this is AMAZING! its descriptive and its about JESUS for crying out loud! I've never seen anything like it and think its probably the best poem I've read (not including ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: [Title needed]
Hi! I'm pointe and I will be reviewing you today :) He said what he said Then turned to go , What he could've had He'll never know . He ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: What if??
WOW! first of all I'm Pointe and I will be reviewing you today :). 1. i have redone the poem into a poem format 2. It's easier to read now ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Love, The Boy Above...
HI! I'm Pointe and I am going to review you today! Dear Scarlett, I’m so sorry, I know that I hurt you in the past, but I’ve change d …honestly. ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Unlucky in Love
hey wicked here to give you a review! 4/11/11 why is this here? what exactly does it mean? He led me on. I swear it, He led me on. All ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: I wish the words would come.
hey! pointe here as requested! Why won't the words come? I know how I feel, and yet they are still stuck inside my head. this seems to not fit with ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: Prom Disaster
HI! I'm pointe and I'll be reviewing you today! just a few things first ~when something is bolded look for a red comment some where. ~ Blue means addition to ...
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: To October
hey WP! (thats your new nickname by the way) I'm going to review you today! Dear October, I like how this starts out,very personal What can I say of you ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: My First Love Chapter One
hey I'm pointe and i will be reviewing you today! the first part is fine so I wont even go into it “Mandi, do you want bacon with your eggs?” ...
Oct 29, 2010 -
Re: Hate or Love? *edited*
hey! Im pointe and I will be reviewing you today corrections are bolded , comments in red , additions in blue and cancelations in strikeout I wrote this just because ...
Oct 29, 2010 -
Re: Hello's and goodbye's.
hi! I am pointe and I am reviewing you today :) my corrections are bolded my comments in red additions in blue and cancels striked out I never thought this ...
Oct 23, 2010