LadySpark

Hello. Here as requested!! Nitpicks: 1. The boy exited his vehicle as he walked toward the house. He opened the house’s mailbox and placed the letters in. He stared at ...

I honestly didn't find any nitpicks to do in this chapter. Honestly. So we are going to skip the nitpicks all together. Grammar: I really saw improvements in this chapter. ...

Hello Oth er one! It's me pointe for a review!!!! Nitpicks: 1. woke up the morning after, looking really bad. As I looked at my reflection in the mirror facing ...

Hi!! here for the last chapter, so far. YEA! I have enjoyed reviewing it so much! Nitpicks: 1. pushed the covers of herself OFF herself? 2. halo. She yawned. "Good ...

Hi Saks! Right off the bat, I can tell I will have some nitpicks for this chapter. 1. Adalyn lay on the soft red couch, unable to sleep. WAIT! is ...

Hello! here for ch. 2!!! Nitpicks: 1. whoa, no nitpicks! This is so good, I have no nitpicks.. Thats a first. Well then I guess I'm off to chapter 3: ...

Hi Saks! Here to review ch. 1!!! yea! *dances* okay, lets get started. :pirate: Nitpicks: (you know how I work by now XD) 1. Aurialla lifted him up so she ...

Hi Saks! Its me again! I have decided to review all of Hazel {so far} cause I need points.XD and I love reviewing your work!!! Nitpicks: 1. The daughter of ...

Hi Saks!!!!!!! It's me pointe, here to do a review!!! So its your first attemt at poetry... *strokes beard* I'll go hard on ya' then XD Nitpicks: 1. For poppy's ...

Hi Mikko!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! here as requested!! So, I am going to do an overall, then go to our joint account and do nit-picks okay? its a win-win-win! Grammar: Pretty good, I ...

Hello! I am Pointe and I will be reviewing you today!!! There's something in my closet, A nd it's growing quite loud , I t giggles and it scratches . ...

OHMIGOSH! I love it. I seriously do. The grammar is correct, everything. You got the dialogue correct, and even made it feel believeble. You made me want to scream at ...

Hi! here for your requested review! first of all congrats on the green! thoughts: 1)this could easily be a novel. A very GOOD novel. Consider that.... 2) your choice of ...

Hi Allie, Here to review you! POINTS OF THE REVIEW: 1)First of all, this is really fast. Your speeding through it, and we don't get to register things before you ...

Hi Chic, here for your review. First of all: Congrats on your first post. This is very intriguing and I can't wait for more! 1) is this a novel, I ...