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Re: Silhouettes - Chapter 1
Hi Bells... Wow. Huge block of text :P. CAPUT :smt021 Oh lookie. I found me in emot form. :smt034 Anyway. Let's start with the title. See it? Up there? It ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: Bump in the night.
Here I was, prepared to review, and I think I'm just going to comment. This was a fantastic poem. I really liked the topic, mostly because that topic isn't explored ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: Google Knows...
Hi! I'm Drama and I'm here to review... Heehee I think i'm going to like this poem! :) S he knows the members of One Direction , Niall, Zayn, Liam, ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: A new year
Hi Gloss! I'm Drama and I'm here to review! :) Wow.. This is... interesting... I notice right off that this isn't formatted like a normal poem would be. So let's ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: Alone
Hi! I'm Drama and I'm here to review! Okay, I'm going to be honest. This seems very... Simple to me. Maybe it's the lack of puncuation. Or the lack of ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: Together Someday
Hi! I'm Drama and I'm here to review. The way you smile completes my day . To think that you're a continent away And I sit here and I patiently ...
Jan 3, 2012 -
Re: Crimson Tears
hi! I'm drama and I'm here to review you! :) Hear that? That is the sound Of my heart trying to beat, This spacing feels a bit off to me. ...
Jan 3, 2012 -
Re: The Real World
souring over the city. Soaring, Bella :P Reality just hurts. this is one of the sentences that I think just don't give the right meaning, cause I feel there are ...
Dec 29, 2011 -
Re: His Princess
Hi Das! Here to review! He took it rough when her momma died. Hit Enter here But she was there like a shining light. < This should be one line ...
Dec 29, 2011 -
Re: Young Writers Censorship
My two cents coming up! Okay, so I've been a member on here for more than a year, and I have to say I love it to pieces. It's such ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: Sunflower Light
Hi! I'm here to review you! I'm Drama. :DD Showers of golden light, and the evening blends to night. This and needs to be at the beginning of the second ...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: Smile, honey - you'll get sunshine.
Mikko/ Marco /Twin brother/sister Well... Anyway, Marco this was a very nice story. I could really see you in the character, and I could also see the child like innocence ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: A Game of Hearts, Part 1
Hi! I'm here to review ;) I gave you my heart , To mend and repair . Something you said "Will take time and care . " But now I ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Dream on.
Marco. Tsk Tsk. Must you be so depressed? I mean, what is with us lately? I'm writing about Dead friends that don't exist, and you're writing about people walking to ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: Order
:) Hi Order comes and order goes , The beginning anew I don't think this is the correct word. Maybe The beginning of something new ? Is the end of ...
Oct 14, 2011
