LadyPurple

That's cute. I don't think I can make a (some what) rap about my brothers because nothing really rhymes with their names. ~Lady purple.

Very nice, Retro. But you need some work on your grammar and you didn't capitalize an "I". well that's all for now! ~lady purple. BTW: i'm rushing.

I am working on this part so please go easy on me! Also thank you for the reviews.

Very nicely done, Solv. I'm looking forward to chapter 1.1 .

I think your friend is a good poem writer. I like it.

Hey there. I really think this is nicely written especially for a first try. It's really unique. I hope I can read this again when ever you re-write it. By ...

Hi Rasberrypancakes. I just wanna say that I really like your poem. Well Lydia pointed out things already so I don't have very much to say. It's really truthful. Keep ...

I agree with Retro about it being forced. But still it's a good little poem.

I really don't know what to say. Just your dad must have loved this if you showed it to him. I now realize he did it just to make me ...

Hey again Jake. I can't say much about anything because everyone else pointed out the errors.... Oh well! You know I can imagine this with some guitar playing but that's ...

Wow this reminds me about how my mom feels about me growing up. Awesome job isha! I really think it's a good poem (better than mine ha ha). I love ...

I only saw maybe a few errors. Like twice you didn't capitalize the "I"s. But with that aside I liked this. I honestly am not very good with reviews so ...

Hey there. Nice to know that i'm not the only new person! Any-who I see a few punctuation errors. I like this but you also forgot to capitalize your "I"s. ...

I really like this. I'm fairly new so i don't exactly know what to say. Sorry....